My Awesome Dad
This is my sixth Summer Learning Journey post for Day 2 Week 1 Activity 3 year 6-8. I had to write about someone I know or what I did that was heroic. I picked my Dad! The thing I found hard while making this post was trying to find a good heroic story. But I was happy to nominate my Dad. Here is my post about my awesome Dad!
Hi Sophie, It's me Tahlia here and I think this blog post is amazing because you have added a great description of what happend and I love all the pop of colours you had in this goggle drawing. Maybe one thing you could do for next time is have a picture of your dad. Overall this is great.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the great comment, Tahlia. I'll do that next time!
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ReplyDeleteIt's Allie here from the SLJ team. Great work with this activity. I really like how you have put so much effort into your presentation. Well done.
WOW! Your Dad is really amazing. He really is a hero. It is so great that he was able to use the skills that he has to help someone else that needed it. He really did save their life. That is just great!
I hope that you had a lovely Christmas and are enjoying the holidays. Keep up the great work!
We are really enjoying reading your posts. You are putting so much effort into them.
Until next time
Allie :)
Thanks for the fantastic comment, Allie! Hope your having a wonderful Summer Holidays too!
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