Wednesday 25 March 2020

Persuasive Writing about 3 Million Dollars

This is my second persuasive writing post for this week. For this task we had to get another card and write about what is written on it. My one was about a lady who just won 3 Million Dollars in the lottery and she wants to tell everyone but I need to persuade her not to. While making this post I found it hard to think of ideas for paragraphs. Here is my post of Persuasive Writing about 3 Million Dollars!


Winning the Lottery
Do you know what people would do if they knew you 3 million dollars?
They would steal it and keep it for themselves. Do you really want that
to happen? Here are three reasons why telling everyone that you have
3 millions dollars is a bad idea!


Criminals
Did you know that burglary is one of the most common crimes
in New Zealand? Now you don’t want to lose 3 million dollars,
do you? I really hope you have home insurance because if you
told everyone that you have got lots of money you could have
your house ransacked and windows broken! You’ve got to look
after that ticket with your life because this is your one chance to
be a millionaire!


People Change
If you have 3 million dollars, what will your friends think, what will
the world think. Your friends might be jealous of you or even worse
they might try to grease you up about giving them lots of money.
Some people just want money, lots and lots of money. That's why
you have to watch out for those people and especially don’t tell them
how much money you have.

News Reporters
You really have to keep away from these because if they find out
about the 3 million dollars, you are in for it. They change your
original story and twist it in ways you could never imagine, so you
could end up being the person who stole 3 million dollars! Personal
questions are the worst. Even though you try to walk away they crowd
around you and start firing questions at you.

Now think again...Is telling everyone that you have 3 million dollars
really a good idea, because there are criminals out there who like
stealing money, friends could change and news reporters could
end up getting you in jail!





4 comments:

  1. Wow Soph, you have put so much thought into your answers. It is so lovely to see you taking these writing activities to the next level with your in depth answering. I agree with your ideas, some people would really take advantage of you if they knew you had lots of money. Now i am intrigued, what would you do if you won 3 million dollars?

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  2. Thanks for the awesome comment, Miss Wilson! I think I would try and help people in other country who have no food or water.

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  3. That is such a kind thing to do. I would love to do this too. I also think i would make something fun in Greymouth, like an adventure park or a theme park. How cool would that be in the holidays.

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