Another Place Another Time

Room 5 has been learning how to structure a narrative using adverbs of place and time. Ours was based on the picture called Another Place, Another Time. We had to write a story about what was happening in the picture and make an ending to it. Here is my Another Place, Another Time writing.

THE RAILWAY TRACK TO THE ISLAND OF KINGS

 It was a dark and gloomy night and dark brown, angry clouds were circling the wrinkled up sea. Suzy suddenly spotted something in the distance, “Yes, yes we are near land,” whispered Suzy. They could all see it now, they had noticed a thing on the island that made them feel envious inside. Suzy, Jack, Alex and Rose could see a white crumbled castle that looked like there was gloomy light flickering on and off. The closer and closer they came to the island the more scared and nervous Suzy, Jack, Alex and Rose got.

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