One of the writing activities over the last few days was to write a 100 word segment about a picture. We used a site called Pobble 365 to find a picture. I found it pretty hard to find the right words to add to my writing and to get exactly 100 words.
Animal Town
In a flurry of feathers and a clatter of hooves an absurd
monstrosity whizzed past my doorstep. Could it have
been a herd of animals, in a car, driving down the
street? It was. The wheels squeaked and the engine
grunted as the car started to propel itself up a hill.
The reeve of the accelerator drowned out all other
noise and it came to a halt midway. I held my
breath. The squawks and roars coming from
the car got louder as it started rolling down
the hill, gaining speed at an alarming rate.
Heading straight for my house…
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