Hi Sophie I liked how you put the words in sentences. I thought it looked really cool. Next time don't put the picture of you at the bottom and don't make the document bigger once the video has started.
Hi Sophie, you've written some great sentences that show the meaning of your words very clearly. Next time, make the writing bigger so it's easier to read. You could also consider only including two sentences on a page to give you more space.
Hi Sophie
ReplyDeleteI liked how you put the words in sentences.
I thought it looked really cool.
Next time don't put the picture of you at the bottom and don't make the document bigger once the video has started.
Thank you for the awesome comment I will remember that next time.
ReplyDeleteHi Sophie, you've written some great sentences that show the meaning of your words very clearly. Next time, make the writing bigger so it's easier to read. You could also consider only including two sentences on a page to give you more space.
ReplyDeleteI will remember that next time.
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