Monday, 30 April 2018

THE SUMMER LION

I have been reading a book called " The Summer Lion." I liked the because it is very funny and is adventurous. I recommend this for all ages. Here is a descriptive sentence that is in the book.










2 comments:

  1. Hi Sophie, this is a great example of a descriptive sentence as it really shows what the curtains looked like. The writer has used adjectives: "silver" and "deep" to describe the stars and the colour. I like the way the sentence begins with the word "Framing";it captures the reader's attention because it is an interesting word to start the sentence.
    Mrs Idle

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  2. Thanks for your very helpful and lovely comment.

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