Thursday, 10 May 2018

Poem

We have been learning how to play with words and punctuation. Room 5 had ten words to play with, they were "I am a swimmer I like to pat my dog." Here is my muddled up Poem.


The Swimmer and the dog
I like my dog, Pat I to am a swimmer I like to pat my dog, a swimmer I am A swimmer I am I like to pat my dog I am Pat, a swimmer I to like my dog

2 comments:

  1. Hi Sophie I'm Isabel from, Awahono School. I like your muddled up poem it is quite funny when you said I am Pat, a swimmer I to like my dog. Maybe at the end of your poem you could do an explanation mark. if you have time you can visit my blog one day.

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  2. I will go on you blog and thank you for you positive comment.

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