In Storybytes we have been reading about the Titanic. When the Titanic sank it was very sad and it was very hard to get information because the music in the background of the videos was very dramatic. We had to find information about the Titanic then write about it in our own words. I made a slideshow about the Titanic. I hope you enjoy it.
Hi Sophie,
ReplyDeleteThe story of the Titanic was indeed very sad. Your story was very interesting to read, and your choice of picture and font are very effective. Did you try to make the ship sink? Maybe you could draw a slide with an iceberg. Something else you could try next time is to add some music.
You mentioned the difficulty of getting information from one video. It's always a good idea to look at three sources of information, then if the information is the same in each one you can be pretty sure it is accurate. If you only use one source there maybe incorrect information.
Thank you for the very good advice.
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ReplyDeleteWow! I really like how you constructed your blurb and how you put in related facts on the same slide. It is very interesting to know that 8 people died during the creation of the massive ship. Maybe, you could stop saying 'I hope you enjoy it' and use some other words instead. Other than that, your work is really amazing.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the very helpful comment.
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