Friday 6 April 2018

Hunting and Fishing

On the first of April Ahaura had the Hunting and Fishing Competition. Hunting and Fishing is for people who like to hunt pests, for example a deer. When people hunt pests it helps farmers grow more grass and it helps the environment. Room 5 had to write what it was like to be there in present tense. We had to look at lots of pictures of things at the Hunting and Fishing, so people wouldn't forget what kind of animals were there. Here is my writing

Hunting and Fishing

Creeping through the crowd, I wonder what all of the people are looking at. As I get to the front I can see a mixture of boars, deer, and red deer all hanging on the side of big blue truck. I feel so grossed out as I walk away from the dead animals. The smell of the dead chamois keeps chasing me. It smells like a wasp nest that got sprayed with diesel.

The prickly pointy grass feels really sharp under my feet as I scamper towards the big grey trailer. When I get to the trailer I spot lots of dead hares,magpies and goats. They all have lots of dry red blood on their bodies and the dead animals smell like a mouse with maggots all over it.

When I look at the deer, I think it is a waste of good meat because people have to cut open the stomachs and all the flies are on the dead animals. There are lots of big deer, boar and other dead animals at the Hunting and Fishing, and it is a really fun event.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Sophie, I like your alliteration in the firs sentence. Good work!
    Mrs Idle

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  2. Thank you for the nice comment.

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